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stazz
10-11-2005, 04:06 PM
ok scince its halloween and every1 is doing a manor haloween ride i figured ide do it to =] and yes i know most of the structures look like avondale manor. anyways heres the story

story :

in 1960 a family known as the ridewood family where just a normal family, the members consisted of kelly ridewood(30 year old mother), emily ridewood (6 year old daughter), and darron ridewood (41 year old father). but on september the 13th darron was swiming in his pool as he slashed his wrist in the pool and then drowned himself. when kelly found his body she also found a note to the side of the pool, it wrote
"dear family and all loved ones,
my story ends here, and so, ill miss you all
-498098967"
noone could decipher his code, authorities thought it was some form of secret writing he made up, but he was wrong. a week later after the death kelly went mad with rage and burned their house down. when emilys wealthy grandmother arived kelly just explained that it was an incident, but it wasnt. emilys grandmother gave them money too buy a new house. kelly couldnt believe it, it was a thousand dollars! enough to build themselves their own mansion. kelly asked her mother in law how she got all that money and she replied with no answer. then kelly invested in buying their own mansion. a year later as they FINALLY moved into the mansion emily cryed as soon as she entered, she couldnt explain it, something didnt feel right.
when she got into her room she was suprised how big it was. it was huge!. on their first night she was ok. by when 2 years passed however. she was not alright.. she had those numbers memorized for no reason. wondering what they ment. then she went to the bathroom and acidently broke the mirror. behind the mirror glass was those numbers. 48098967. she didnt know why they where there. she heard her mom up mumbling, emily whent into her moms room as she saw her mom with cut wrist writing "dead" over and over with the blood coming from her wrist. emily ran and kelly chased after her. emily grabbed a kitchen knife out of the kitchen and stabbed her mom in self defence. a day later the police showed up with a phsychiotrist. the phsychiotrist told emily that her mom had been going to him for a week complaining about illusions and emily would be exicuted for killing someone even if it was self defence. emily could not believe this so she escaped their grip and ran into the house and used the same kitchen knife she used to defend herself to slit her own throwt. from that day you can still hear emily walking though the halls and laughing.

anyways heres a teaser pic
http://filehost.to/files/2005-10-11_03/220404_Shot0009.png
^teaser^

PIN : updated the story / added ages

grod4L
10-11-2005, 11:14 PM
Aah, I hate murderous little girls....*shivers*

I'd love to see more!

stazz
10-12-2005, 03:10 PM
ahh wel my prob with posting more pics is that its not finished and if i show more it wont look like its inside the mansion

-MoNtU
10-12-2005, 03:17 PM
Everyone is inspired by avondale manor.:)

stazz
10-12-2005, 03:23 PM
heh well this ride started as me expirementing with controlling wild mouse (which this is anyways). then i stumbled upon the spooky scenery and noticed that ive NEVER used that type of scenery in my parks so i decided scince every1 else is trying to show their skills off by using manors i figured i would to, anyways i couldnt think of how to structure so i looked to avondale manor and tried to use a bit of his structuring but i changed it around a bit so it dosnt look exactly the same

and as for the name, i couldnt think of a good one and my unreleased/unheared of park named ridewood park sounded like a good family name so i decided to make the story

and as the violent/ghostlike story goes, i was jst thinking of something seing as im a strong believer in ghost, and the black dust stumbled upon me when i saw an episode of supernatural
( the air plain one) and came across that story, but im not sure i like it, i dunno my mind is creepy :rolleyes:

anyways thats pretty much the whole background lol :p

edit : ok as for the new story, i was trying to think of something more realistic and well nobody was in the room and the lights where off so i was in a horror/drama writing mood and jst came up with that, that was originally suppost to be the background of the manor but i changed my mind, i like this one better

Plokoon111
10-12-2005, 07:13 PM
hmm cant wait to see some more pics! Ill plobally make a spooky manor too! Good luck! And nice story!

stazz
10-13-2005, 05:14 PM
scratch what i just said. i updated the story and i think this one fits more because now every thing has an explination

edit : oops forgot to put ages, ill do that now
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hmm so i changed it from 40 days. to 2 years, only so i can have a long enough time

RctGirl45
10-29-2005, 05:38 PM
Sorry, but I'm not sure you can buy a mansion with a thousand dollars.
I don't even think you can even buy a house with a thousand dollars! I think you should try a million or two.

Well anyways, there's not much to tell so I'm not really going to say anything at all.

P.S. Man, everyone's copying Avondale Manor! And plus, grod4l made a tutorial on how to do the gardens and now everyone is going to have a ____ Manor!

Sorry I just had to let that out!

grod4L
10-30-2005, 10:02 AM
Originally posted by RctGirl45

P.S. Man, everyone's copying Avondale Manor! And plus, grod4l made a tutorial on how to do the gardens and now everyone is going to have a ____ Manor!

Sorry I just had to let that out!

:haha:


Hey stazz, are you still working on this? It'd be great if you could get some new screens up...

stazz
11-09-2005, 04:02 PM
Originally posted by RctGirl45
Sorry, but I'm not sure you can buy a mansion with a thousand dollars.
I don't even think you can even buy a house with a thousand dollars! I think you should try a million or two.

Well anyways, there's not much to tell so I'm not really going to say anything at all.

P.S. Man, everyone's copying Avondale Manor! And plus, grod4l made a tutorial on how to do the gardens and now everyone is going to have a ____ Manor!

Sorry I just had to let that out!

its a game 0.0 not everything has to be realistic you no,, and grod4l im stopping construction untill all of the scenery objects i have are updated for wild

rushfan
11-12-2005, 12:11 PM
could someone clue me in on what avondale manor is

grod4L
11-12-2005, 02:48 PM
Check my sig below.

Sorry. I couldn't resist telling him myself :D

Yes, I'm arrogant, so what...

:haha: