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PyroFREAK30001
09-18-2006, 08:24 AM
Hey guys I working on a small project while Im working on my big one(Rockn With The Peas)anyways my small project is The Pink Panther

Here Is The Teaser! http://media.putfile.com/Pink-Panther-teaser
edit: Here Is The Full Video http://www.megaupload.com/?d=PMSBXCC0
Comments Welcome!:10sur10: OR :grrrrr:

RCT3guy3000
09-20-2006, 01:33 PM
I'm looking forward to the full vidio!:D :up:

ZoomRocks
09-20-2006, 09:38 PM
looks great cant wait to watch

Pasaway
09-21-2006, 12:39 AM
:weird: not to be rude or anything, but that really showed nothing...

-a preview for a fireworks show isn't just red rockets with mines...its something that you put time and effort into, that was too short, and only showed mosty rides instead for fireworks... :weird: look at the previews at www.rctpyro.co.uk , they have a alot of good previews.

*your spelling*

-COMING not comeing

-PRODUCTIONS not pruductions

These comments are to help you and make you improve, I'm not trying to be mean. Anyways, I look foward to seeing your show. I wish you good luck! ;)

RocketGib
09-21-2006, 01:35 AM
Speaking of spelling....


These comments are to help you and make you improve, I'm not rying to be mean. Anyways, I look foward to seeing your show. I wish you good luck! ;)

:o

Pasaway
09-21-2006, 10:29 AM
well at least you get the point...i did that on purpose...:p

ZoomRocks
09-21-2006, 07:19 PM
Well He's a beginner when I started out I spelled alot of stuff wrong, I though i looked good, Like I always say "I'm going to let no Crackhead, put me down!" So Keep Trying, Dont give up!!!!1

RCT3guy3000
09-21-2006, 07:24 PM
Edit this post:What the flip I just edited my post and I pushed save and.....A double post!

RCT3guy3000
09-21-2006, 07:27 PM
Well He's a beginner when I started out I spelled alot of stuff wrong, I though i looked good, Like I always say "I'm going to let no Crackhead, put me down!" So Keep Trying, Dont give up!!!!1
Yeh even though I suck

PyroFREAK30001
09-21-2006, 07:31 PM
Well He's a beginner when I started out I spelled alot of stuff wrong, I though i looked good, Like I always say "I'm going to let no Crackhead, put me down!" So Keep Trying, Dont give up!!!!1

Thanks ZoomRocks!:heart:

Pasaway
09-21-2006, 09:26 PM
Well He's a beginner when I started out I spelled alot of stuff wrong, I though i looked good, Like I always say "I'm going to let no Crackhead, put me down!" So Keep Trying, Dont give up!!!!1

Well i didn't mean to put him down. I just wanted to make some suggestions of what his next preview for his next show will be. I like how this is going, and hope that you do well. Good luck. ;)

n747
09-21-2006, 10:54 PM
Spelling will give away your age almost immediately (or your ethnicity). When doing a teaser of your show, you need to proof-read it thoroughly. If you don't know how to spell a word, look it up. Take pride in what you make. Theres nothing worse than seeing a glaring typo in someone's movie.

As for the show...you really showed nothing. And even the preview clips made no sense. A teaser is supposed to get people excited about what you're creating, not confuse them, or make them angry because they had to wait a few minutes to download it. It's meant to show people the best parts of your show, with fresh angles and smart cutting.

Then again, shows should have sets too... (every show should have a set - not just a bunch of mortars in grass)

Pasaway
09-21-2006, 11:38 PM
thats what ive been trying to say...thank you n7(thats your name in rctpyro.co.uk)...;)

PyroFREAK30001
09-23-2006, 08:20 AM
DONE!
Heres the full video http://www.megaupload.com/?d=PMSBXCC0

ZoomRocks
09-23-2006, 10:05 AM
going to download now

PyroFREAK30001
09-23-2006, 10:10 AM
thanks for downloading!:up: :D

rctlil'man
09-23-2006, 01:14 PM
WOW great job on this can you pm the custom fireworks links please

ZoomRocks
09-23-2006, 01:42 PM
Ya me too, I love your show

Pasaway
09-23-2006, 02:27 PM
Okay- first things first.

It's time for the critisim. If you can't handle critisim, then why even post this topic.

1) syncronization - the syncronization was a little of beat, you got some of it right, but you are improving.

2) beginning of show- there were no fireworks at all... you could have used some lights or founatins from firework pack 12...

3) fireworks- the fireworks that you used are completly unrealistic, except PyroMikkels stuff, and only some od MB's work. you should use a little bit more out of firework pack 12...

4) uninteresting- no offense, but right when the show started, fireworks just came out of random places and it got really boring...

5) show...hmmm - the show wasn't good or bad, it was an below average show. the fireworks were usally the same mines, there was no finale???, the sycronization was a okay, fireworks were unrealitic, although, all in all, you are improving.

I hope I did not hurt your feelings, this is to help you in your future shows. I look foward to see those...;)

-Pasaway :)

P.S. I will PM you an example of a show. Later today, because I have to get to my birthday party. See you later. :)

PyroFREAK30001
09-23-2006, 05:46 PM
Thanks Ill try my best to do my best on my next show.;)