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goosec524
11-08-2006, 05:37 PM
Hey this is my first fireworks show so i thought i'd put it up here to see what you all thought. i'm pretty new to all this so let me know what you think!

here it is:
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8504207814685106470

PyroFREAK30001
11-08-2006, 05:41 PM
Welcome to the board Ill see the movie and tell you what I think.........

PyroFREAK30001
11-08-2006, 05:48 PM
Why didn't you use those great custom fireworks at the begining. If you have PM pack you should of used way more of his fireworks there great. Over all I give it a 3/5 liked the music you chose and a liked the set.:)

goosec524
11-08-2006, 05:53 PM
yeah i didnt download the custom packs till i was halfway done with it, and i didnt feel like changing. since it was my first show i was just trying to figure out what i was doing. thanks for your input, i'm gunna make a new one soon when i figure out what song i wanna use, and i'll put it up here again.

Rct33
11-09-2006, 03:27 PM
it was alright for your first.
The ending was quite good.

Improvements:
Try not to use all these lasers at the beginning, they look a bit silly and block some of the fireworks out.
You repetead the Gold Willow firework lots and got repetative.
Use a more range of fireworks.
Try to make a bit more of a finale.

The next show i hope to see you get better.