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ZoomRocks
04-11-2007, 05:54 PM
Since the beginning time the stars have inspired us to wonder
And to open our hearts to the beauty of the sparkles in your imagination
For imagination is a small world
And remind us that dreams come true
So gase in the sparkling stars to that magical place
That only you could IMAGINE!!

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d84/ZoomRocks/IFITS3.jpg

Share Your Dreams Come True
As Your Heart Take Fight
And Reminds You To Believe
With Imagine A Fantasy In The Sky

Download It On Filefront (http://files.filefront.com//;7214472;/)

Google Video (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=8191853420533776904&hl=en)
(Was too big for Youtube, sorry)

Once again many problem popped up with this show but I'll discribe them later, Enjoy The Show

PyroFREAK30001
04-11-2007, 06:35 PM
Great job! I enjoyed it very much:)

ZoomRocks
04-11-2007, 07:17 PM
Thanks A bunch

disneyzcoolz
04-12-2007, 05:18 PM
i think it's awsome but the castle needs some work please dont take it personally

ZoomRocks
04-12-2007, 05:20 PM
Dont worry I did build it, lol

-LiLDaReDeViL5-
04-14-2007, 03:03 PM
absolutely amazing!Great Job!.i like how you put disney attraction soundtracks in there.

Nethero
04-14-2007, 07:36 PM
Amazing! By far my favorites were "Under the Sea" and the light that goes around the castle like an arch.

Master_Player09
04-15-2007, 11:39 AM
Wow.

Armenion
04-15-2007, 09:43 PM
:eek2: A M A Z I N G

great job man, i loved it, five stars! :up:

but please, where did you done the download
of the fireworks? :D

ZoomRocks
04-15-2007, 10:54 PM
Most of the firework I had made or had gotten from other people put RCTPyro.com has alot of Fireworks.

Thanks Everyone, I just wished more people would have commented it on RCTPyro

Pasaway
04-17-2007, 07:42 PM
Hello. I am Jeff from rctpyro.com, a Full Member and President of Palakpakan Inc. to be exact. As you all know, rctpyro.com, has high expectations, and this show... well... is very far from that - sorry.

well... no offense... but i was kind of bored watching the show. Some effects were cool and all, but some were just fantasy and completely unrealistic.

Here are some overall main points:

1) the show was too close to the castle and horribly viewed. you should view it from the ground using the free look camera.

2) that castle? again? building a castle is not that hard, if you built it yourself it would add a personal touch to your show.

3) the lights were not really needed in the show. some were unsynchronized, they popped out of no where. the lights didn't match with the castle.

4) some fireworks were used many times in the show, some didn't fit well with the music.

5) the fading out and in of each scene was weird. in real life, people would not close there eyes exactly between those scenes.

6) this show is becomes similar to your "Unleash the Magic" of how little effort is put into each part. i thought that your "WUACS" and "TYOTB" was better.

7) no color scheme. stick to one in each part. all colors were random at parts.

8) the imagine song had to sync to it at all. the lights at the beginning of the song looked like squeezing eyeballs. that part almost made me fall asleep.

9) you used At mad's effects and your company effects and some other ones. they did not match and made me loose the excitement and building of the show.

10) lights. in real life, mortars would not be hanging out of turrets and blinking. they were distracting and just looked awful being in the show... also use those lights in a stage show - not a castle.

Sorry to the bad comments man, but really- you need to work on it. You might want to sumbit an extravaganza one day at rctpyro, but i don't think you're ready, you have to prove your capability first.

Heres the long-winded review:

0:05 - bad start; bad lights; made me not want to watch anymore.
0:13 - what the hell is that? lights blinking inside the castle? have you ever seen Disney do that?
0:30 - the light's man... OMG. needs color variation. or should be just not be in the show.
0:34 - horrible syncronization w/ first song. the sparkle willows look random, and just appear becuase they do, not becuase they match with the soundtrack.
0:39 - dismayed light scheme on castle. does not match with music whatsoever.
0:48 - golden waterfall willows or golden brocades would be much more better that sparkle willows.
0:57 - OMG! what the hell with the party poppers. does don't match with music again also...
1:02 - OMG! what the hell with the tail splitter? doesn't match either...
1:09 - mines do not match.
1:13 - im sorry... but i could not understand the speaking part. its sounds like a retarted voice. no offense...
1:17 - blues lights are not good
1:34 - bad lights. looks like squeezing eyeballs...
1:37 - 1:44 - random color changing peonies. make a color scheme.

more to come... have to go. even though you had problems, it's not a holiday show. you could release this anytime of the year making it better. this was just awful - no offense - I'm just trying to help you get better.

Rctpyro.com score from me: 3/10
Atari.com score from me: 5/10

Sorry man. You really just need to improve.

Armenion
04-17-2007, 08:00 PM
in rctPyro, i only find 9 packs of download,

where i can find more fireworks in this site?

** and please, sorry for my english! =)

ZoomRocks
04-17-2007, 08:52 PM
I dont even feel like starting anything so I'm going to pretend like Jeff's Comment isnt there. Armenion I cant help you there, request some on RCTPyro and become really active and make firend, (Firend that wont act like they are the best) and if you help anybody out on here or Rctpyro make sure they aren't Flaky (Fake Or Back Stabbers) Good Luck and If you come out with any shows I would love to see your work

Pasaway
04-17-2007, 10:55 PM
Umm... excuse me. Well look who's acting mean. I'm am just making a critique about your show to improve. Not a back stab. I'm no backstabber, I'm trying to make you learn from this mistakes that you could try for your next show. I did not betray you, I only said what I feel about your show. If you can't accept constructive criticism, they why even release this to the whole community?

ZoomRocks
04-18-2007, 09:13 AM
I didn't mention any name you just assumed it was you. I do accpet constructive criticism but lately you have been going way to far with my shows. This was supposed to be a partner show but my partner flaked out. Thats why my show is so lame. If I would have started it on my own it would have been a lot better.

DLO5
04-19-2007, 12:58 AM
Oh wow...the flaming virus is spreading! Will it show no mercy???

Loqo
04-28-2007, 02:50 PM
Amazing work, i enjoyed that. :)